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Come a little closer; let me whisper in your ear
Let me tell you something you were never meant to hear
Never tell another, never let the truth appear
Never let them find the things so close, so real, so near

Statements made of venom slip away from poisoned lips
Reaching for the power, feel it touch your fingertips
Watching as the thread I hang my very life on rips
Every thought of laughter causes my heart to eclipse

Come a little closer and look down upon my skin
See the person everybody wished I could have been
Feel the endless torture that poured out from deep within
Taste the air around you, drenched in every broken sin

Listen to my screams, oh, listen closely to my cries
Search for every nightmare lying down upon the skies
Treasure with your very soul the truth behind my eyes
And cradle your existence with the blood of my goodbyes…
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No. I ain't a cutter, I just write to sound... depressed. O.o
HI! I wish I could've thought of a better ending, but... i couldn't... so y'all are stuck with this.

Comments please! 8D

~ Mikki
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:icondarknessunderthemoon:
Hey, it's alright. :heart: I always write sad poems or story's, I seem to never write something good. -.- It's so very sad sometimes. So I understand your pain. lol

~Elli
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
First off, THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE WATCH AND FAVE :D
Second, ahaha, I stink when it comes to happiness. xD

~ Mikki
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:icondarknessunderthemoon:
Your more then welcome. :heart: I really love your poems so I couldn't hold back from watching! :hug: And yesh, I understand! I suck at anything happy. -.- Everytime I sit down to try to write, I end up writing something sad.....>.< Like I black out and the next thing I know, I'm like 'REALLY?!' Then I gets all sad. lol
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD
Same here. I tried writing a love poem once... and it ended up as a suicide/domestic abuse poem. xD

~ Mikki
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:icondarknessunderthemoon:
*laughs* I'm sorry my dear. :squee: I tried to write a happy couple story and it ended with her dying and going back to see him crying....it wasn't what I wanted but my brain wanted me to write something else. lol
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kitty-made-of-shadow Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:D I'm AMAZED!!! Its so deep and beautiful yet it's terribly painful!
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!! :)

~ Mikki
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lark8v Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Loved it
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!!! It means a ton. :)

~ Mikki
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rothus66 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really great poem and I thought the ending fit well with the rest.
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