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Stars made of nightmares and skies made of fears
Hearts made of glass and a home built of tears
Cries made of silence and words made of knives
Dreams of the struggle to simply survive
Souls made of paper and minds made of flames
She is a piece of their loveliest game
No longer can she feel more than disgust
Even a rainbow does turn into dust…
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Thank you very much for letting me use it! :D

And I hate this poem. -.- BUT OH WELL :D

Comments? O.o

~ Mikki
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Litlle-Cherry Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
I love it ! :)
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an-chan123 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
such a beautiful and wonderful poem and really awesome photography.
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mikichihiro Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i reeeeeaally love the poem~ sad yet beautiful =)
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BatintheHat Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Lovely :)
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mee-sira Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
I really love the poem. It is amazing and sad and just... Wow.
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!! :)

~ MIkki
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Krispz Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i really love the picture you've used aswell love the lighting and the way its been done exellent:) love your poem as well goes very well with the picture very creative work love it :squee:
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!! ^.^ the picture is DEFINITELY more amazing than the poem though, haha. :) But thanks a lot!!

~ Mikki
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Krispz Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your welcome i love this piece a lot:)
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Yorben2 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012
yeah my colour is yellow! yellow is nice colour!

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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love yellow :D :D :D

~MIkki
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You shouldn't hate this poem at all. Very well written, nice flow and rhythm. I can't even pick a favourite part I loved it all.
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thanks! :)

~ Mikki
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JamieCollie Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow impressive!
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :3

~ Mikki
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Elle-Julianna Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
Very nice ^.^
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!!!!!

~ Mikki
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Elle-Julianna Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
You are very welcome ^.^
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DemonOfTheCakeXx Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
aww i love it!!!!!
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank youuu!

~ Mikki
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Madelonetjj Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Fun fact: The original pic and this poem were right next to each other on the popularity page. xD
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
O_O
Must I speak of how awesome that is?!

~ MIkki
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Madelonetjj Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Well it got me kind of confused at first :B I was like WAHHTTT WHAT IS GOING ON HERE.
And then I opened both up and noticed yours was a poem and you got permission so it was all cool XD
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah. XD

~ Mikki
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ColouredArt Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so cool ;)
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank ya! :D

` Mikki
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Lhassinu Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
You hate this poem? WHY?! It is soooo amazing!!!
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The words aren't very descriptive.. but I've been liking it a little more now, 'cause so many people are so incredibly kind. :)
And thank you!!!

~ Mikki
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Lhassinu Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
You're welcome :3 We are not only kind, we REALLY love it!
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwwww, thank youu!!

~ Mikki
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Lhassinu Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
:hug:
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NekoKitty447 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
That was a lovely poem~♥
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank youuu!!! ^.^

~ Mikki
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gummy321 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist
Finally I see a poem that rhymes! :iconilavplz: I like it! :clap:
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehe :3 I always write poems that rhyme ^.^
THANK YOU!

~ mikki
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gummy321 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist
You're most welcome! ^^ :tighthug:
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Tartaritantana Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Student General Artist
amazing :heart:
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!

~ Mikki
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Tartaritantana Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Student General Artist
very welcome, love your creativity =D
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InuKnight Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
REALLY loved this! MY favorite thing I've seen yet! IT'S AMAZING. Did you write the poem? It's the best i've ever read. I truely LOVE this.
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow... hehe, thanks. :iconblush--plz:
The photograph isn't mine. Click on the link in the description to see the original photograph :)
Yes, I wrote the poem... :3 If you like it that much, could you check out my other ones? You'd have to go into my folder to find mine. :)
Thanks so much! Seriously, that was an amazing comment..

~ Mikki
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InuKnight Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
The pic is cool but I REALLY liked the poem!!!!!!!
I'll check out all your other poems monday or as soon as i have time I REALLY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe, thanks!!!!!! ^.^

~ Mikki
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InuKnight Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012
Yup. Anytime:)
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floridapanther28 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
REALLY interesting and clear photo. :) I also really like the poem too ^_ ^
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!! :) The photograph belongs to someone else... click on the link in the description to see :)

~ Mikki
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floridapanther28 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I saw~! ^_^

Congrats on getting the front page btw ;)
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I GOT THE FRONT PAGE?!?! O.o
When did this happen!?!
O.o
Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet. :D

~ Mikki
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floridapanther28 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it happened, like, THREE days ago XD I remember always seeing the picture of chalk, then I finally got tired of seeing it so I just clicked on it to see what it was X'D

CONGRATULATIONS~! (*blows a horn)

-flp28, over n out.
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw maaannn... I feel so... loved. I'm not used to this feeling. XD

~ Mikki
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