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Holding hands? A clever way of fighting off the cold
Telling every secret so they don't remain untold
Laughing, though he's said it oh so many times before
Staring deep into his eyes to open rusted doors
Staying up to talk to him, but only for support
Innocent intentions others do tend to distort
Kissing him so gently, promises until the end…
Can't destroy this happiness with such a loyal friend…
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Here we go! :D
:icondarkprincess512:, your request! :D
"If you could write something about a couple without the label 'boyfriend, girlfriend' and how it feels... Like they are like going out but arn't calling it bf gf"
And there's the quote of your request. xD I'm not sure if I did this right... And I'm sorry if I didn't! But I tried!!!

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Comments please! :)

~ Mikki
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~BellaBugia Apr 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You definitely did this right! This is currently where I find myself at the moment. Kinda of a couple without the label.. I think? It's like being stuck in limbo.
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~Mourning-Star98 Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I absolutly love this! The poem and the picture!
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~InconsequentialPoet Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!!!! :)


~ MIkki
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~Mourning-Star98 Mar 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome!
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~dweckie Mar 16, 2012  Student Writer
My favourite poem of yours, so sweet (: :heart:
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~InconsequentialPoet Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
YAY! :D
I hate love poems, so... y'know.. at least SOMEONE liked it. XD

~ Mikki
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~dweckie Mar 16, 2012  Student Writer
But, but, love poems!
You can't dislike them, positive ones are so heartwarming :aww:
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~InconsequentialPoet Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm kinda going through a thing with "love" right now... not like "OMG MY BF IS LIKE SO OMG" 'cause I don't have a boyfriend :D
But love poems are like reminders of a bunch of stressful stuff going on right now... so I hate them xD
I'm not much of a hopeless romantic either..

~ Mikki
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Mood: Love ~dweckie Mar 16, 2012  Student Writer
Oh, my apologies to you XD
Me neither, which I suppose is why I like love poetry. It's cute (:
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~InconsequentialPoet Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah... understandable.. O.o

DUDE HI

~ Mikki
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