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There sits the girl with the things in her eyes
Monsters, destruction, and sweet butterflies
Hopscotch and daisies, surrounded by screams
Beautiful dresses now torn at the seams
Crayons and paintbrushes, villains and grins
Young, gladsome innocence, hatred and sins
Little red houses on roads left to fade
Gorgeous moonlight shining off of the blade
Blood pouring out as she cries her own name
Knowing she's forced to take each bit of blame
She could have stopped it and left it behind
All of these things in her troubled young mind
She could have saved them if she dared to try
Rather, though, she left herself there to die.
Now, others watch as she sits on the ground
Keeping their distance and letting her drown
In her own worries and things she won't tell
Waiting for her mind to kill her as well…
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Yeaaaahhhhh... I think this writer's block REALLY loves me, 'cause it won't freaking go away >.<
But I can crap out more poetry this way, so that's good, eh?

COMMENTS ARE LOVED. :D

~ Mikki
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So prettah!
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:) I really love this no matter how sad it is.
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~InconsequentialPoet Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much!!! ^.^

~ MIkki
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~InconsequentialPoet May 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thaanks :)

~ Mikki
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I'll admit, I go through the "Literature" section and usually leave it thinking "meh"
But this one hooked me in, I wanted to keep reading because I wanted to know where you going with it. It's the fact that I wanted it to get "happier" but then... Well it didn't. I guess that's what makes writings good though right?

What I'm trying to say is, I like it. Lol
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~InconsequentialPoet Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ahaha, yaayyy!!! Thank you so much!!! :D That means a lot to me, honestly.
And yeah, I kinda fail at being happy XD
Thank you so much!!!

~ Mikki
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Mood: Love ~Redrose9726 Apr 11, 2012  Student Writer
I LOVE IT & I KNOW THE FEELING.... I'VE FELT LIKE THAT BEFORE SO I CAN RELAE TO IT..... IT BUETIFUL!!!!
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~InconsequentialPoet Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOUUU!!!!! <3

~ MIkki
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~CiwiArt Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
great poem
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