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I feel so worthless, without any purpose,
You don't really need me, that's plain to see.
You want me to smile? I will for a while...
But deep inside, I will continue to hide,
This feeling of worthlessness that I just can't address.
When will I feel, really begin to heal?
My fear is never, I'll be like this forever.
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kitcatclaz Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Professional Photographer
Wow, very expressive. short & too the point. Hopefully
it will not be forever, your smile is needed in other places.
Hugs for you
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! Your kind words are very much appreciated!! <3
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kitcatclaz Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Professional Photographer
your most welcome :)
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MiyuCross12 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
i used to feel like this. its not pleasant.
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Blackfoxtails Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Nice, I feel lime that at home but I'm working to try and turn some of my life around.
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Heathen-God Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
reminds me of the story i'm writing, but if this is autobiographical and if i'm correct in my writing, then things do heal. Fear ebbs and breaks before the next and newest of your obstacles begin to make their appearance. Still i really like the rythm and feel of this poem
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you very much! I really appreciate your comment, it means a lot to me.
And, yes it is autobiographical.
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Heathen-God Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
oh, well lets hope i'm right. I'm glad that the things i say can have a good effect on somebody...instead of insult lol
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Eredith Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012
Depressing, lots of emotion.
I like it.
*Mezzo
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InconsequentialPoet Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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