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Starving children reaching out for mommy's hand to hold
Pretty little princess crying due to ruined gold
Infants losing breaths and toddlers drenched in broken bones
Lady in a shining gown without her silver throne
Parents fearing for their lives as bullets fight the wind
Teenage girl in tears due to a blemish on her skin
See the people dying with a grin upon their face…
Since they saw that winning just meant finishing the race…
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I know it's awful, but I can't think of anything better! I'm sorryyyy!!!

And it's pathetic... But I barely care. I hope I got the point across well.

Comments please! :D

~ Mikki
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Oh my god that is amazing! <3
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~InconsequentialPoet Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank youuu!!! :D And thanks for adding this to your faves!
It means a ton!
Would you mind checking out the rest of my gallery? Because this definitely isn't my best... XD

~ Mikki
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:iconloveamysteriousthing:
Awful?! did you really say that this is awful??? If this is awful then my poetry flat out sucks 'cause yours is so much better! I freakin love this piece!!! :faint:
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~InconsequentialPoet Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ahaha, thank you! XD
I realllly hate this though... I've written better (which still isn't good, ahaha)... YOU SHOULD CHECK OUT THE GALLERY :D
But if you're looking for my poetry, go to the folder entitled "my daughter Mikki's poetry", ehehe.
again... THAAAAAANK YOUUUUUU!!

~ Mikki
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:iconloveamysteriousthing:
Otay! I'll be sure to take a look :la: and I think the poem is really good! Never compare to your other work because then you're not viewing the poem for what it is. (= Just an FYI
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~InconsequentialPoet Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yesh ma'am! :D
And y'know whats better than :la:?
:icontoiletla-plz: :B

~ Mikki
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:iconladanceplz: :iconrainbowlaplz: :iconladanceplz: :iconlaplz: haha i love all the la's. I just don't know how to make THAT toilet la. I know this one :icontoiletlaplz:
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~InconsequentialPoet Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:icontoiletla-plz: Hehehe...
It's icontoiletla-plz. MUAHAHAH

~ Mikki
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~InconsequentialPoet Mar 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
HOORAYYYY!!!!!

Also: :iconchickendanceplz: I is chicken. Hear me roar.

~ Mikki
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